Okay, no snippet this week. However, I did put a link in my sidebar to the first four chapters of my WIP. If you're interested, give it a quick read!
This was supposed to be an easy, carefree weekend. One of those rare weekends where spontaneity is possible because plans were not made ahead of time. We could lounge on the couch, work on our hobbies, or even do a little shopping. And, no, I'm not referring to the necessary evil of grocery shopping, but the much more enjoyable version where you get to buy things that actually make you happy. Because the oldest boy needed some pants and the youngest could use a new pair of shoes, I decided to head into the city to do some shopping at Kohl's. Of course, my decision to shop there was not quite so altruistic. Mama needed a new bathing suit! So, I pack the kids up and head into the city. The youngest picks out his shoes . The oldest tries on a few pairs of jeans and ends up with two in the basket. Did I mention we have to shop in the men's department now? That he's wearing size 29? My baby is growing up! Then it was Mom's ...
Ahh man, now I want more! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks.
ReplyDeleteAlthough, now that we've talked in person, I have to know where John thinks the narrator makes an appearance because there is no omniscient narrator in any of my stories. Ever. I write in tight
3rd person POV. Characters make assumptions and guesses, but don't read minds. Well..unless they're psychic, but only one character in this story that kind of mentalist ability.
So I either have a typo or he misread...
Thank goodness I plan on handing this off to a proofreader before I self-publish!