Okay, here's one of the poems I wrote for my class last week. The only changes between what I turned in and what I've written below is the addition of punctuation. The original had no punctuation.
Becoming Me
Sometimes
I think I have lived.
Sorrows and joys echo
through the past.
Memories of warm sunshine,
recollections of rain.
Years of laughter
tears
and confusion
serve as mile-markers
in my journey
of becoming me.
Becoming Me
Sometimes
I think I have lived.
Sorrows and joys echo
through the past.
Memories of warm sunshine,
recollections of rain.
Years of laughter
tears
and confusion
serve as mile-markers
in my journey
of becoming me.
It's nice. Different from other poems I've read of yours.
ReplyDeleteI’m no connoisseur of poetry. But I like it. Thanks for sharing it.
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