I've been told I should add a comment option to my blog. I'm going to try to find one that works. My last attempt was a dismal failure.

And...let's see....today's writing:
I reread the main conflict in Chapter Two. Had to make a few adjustments. I think it reads a bit better now and makes more sense. Davne, the MC, put up a good fight but in the end she realized she was trapped. Her options, the consquences awaiting her decision, and the stakes were all introduced through her POV or dialogue. I'm pleased with the result. I think.